Crippled

i'm crippled and not whole
a life without a soul
my heart and empty hole
with lips already sown
eyes always closed
a being with no bone
so what am i pray tell
only time will tell

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Nice imagery. I really enjoyed reading this, it's so descriptive and leaves nothing out. Except the fact that it leaves the readers guessing what this being could be, but that's what I like about it. It gives a little wonder and curiosity to the sickly vision. I won't guess though, I like to leave art as it is and not try to decode it most of the time. This is a poem that I don't think should be decoded and analyzed, it should be appreciated.
Wonderfully written! Thanks for sharing.