POMONA

when you watch yourself
walking into those white walls
the meds are working

Reviews

[Jack Dawkins]

Your poems are starting to make sense, If we are talking about Pomona Valley Hospital, which specialises in cancer care and promotes alternative healthcare therepies, including medical cannabis. Then again they are good without explanation.

[Mockingbird]

the pomona hospital i was talking about had a psych ward. this book is a bunch of haikus dedicated to all the places i did stints.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is an interesting little poem...

all meds have such powerful potentials in them

and your impressions in this poem are kick-a*s

nice work

[Allen Smuckler]

same comment as before....plus, traditional haikuists, would demand it. (; or - or : or even , )
That being said I loved it..The imagery was so real, I felt the bump...slightly. Humorous albeit sad...We can tend to lose ourselves in meds that numb the world...
Another great write MB
allen

[khalid]

looking for more

[Mark]

city? Goddess?