Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Won't you stay a while?

Won't you stay a while?

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

Darlin' won't you stay a little longer

Make my heart beat just a bit faster

Cause you make me feel so warm inside

And never fail to make me smile

 

If I close my shimmering eyes

I can almost feel your lips on mine

Wishing upon a million stars

That they might take me where you are

 

So maybe one day you'll hold me

As close as you possibly can

Making me feel beautiful, loved, safe

In this dreamlike wonderland

 

So darling just stay a little while longer

Keep this fantasy alive

Give me something to remember you

Until we meet next time

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


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Lost in Wonderland
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Loved it!! It made me get that giddy feeling you get when your watching a romance movie. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

thank you:)
God Bless
~Mickey
This is so amazing I love it girl! :) it flows really well, it's just really pretty. Really sweet words! Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

thank you c:
God bless
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Pax
beautiful...and lovely write... full of passionate longing...
wonderful write my friend...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you friend(:
This is such a tender, beautiful, bittersweet lyric... There is a longing so pure and loving that moves the heart to that dreamish wonderland... When he finds you, he's going to be a very lucky guy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

thank you so much:)
God bless

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Added on October 20, 2012
Last Updated on November 3, 2012
Tags: Romance, Love, Poem, Poetry, Lalala

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