Do You Remember Me?

I'm a crazy hopeless romantic. <3

Do you remember me? I remember you, You were that sweet,kind and gentle guy who'd always make me laugh. I remeber you, Do you rememer me? I don't think I've ever forgotten you, After all,you were my first love, Bet you didn't know that,did you? I've always loved you, But I didn't realize it intil you left.   Do you love me?   Please,say you do.   I've waited all this time for you to come back,   I knew you would return,I never gave up hope,   Either way if you don't remember me or don't love me,   I still remember you and I still love you.   After all,I live for you.       Even after you said you didn't love me,    I still live for you.    I've always lived for you,         Only for you...

Reviews

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

You should really live for yourself.
noone else will.

[shinybluestars03]

Yes, it is hard to let go
of someone you really cared about,
and it does hurt to know that they
probably never felt the same.
But its ok life must go on...
Nice poem
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

[Hannah Jane]

I enjoyed reading this poem. It is so sad, yet I think almost everyone has felt this way at one point or another. You captured the sense of hopelessness that comes with a lost love. Nice work.

[Mr. Lopez]

I respect the hopeless romantic. There are truths in the words of such a person because love cannot be built on a foundation of dishonesty. There is a sad feeling to your poem that leaves your readers feeling lonely with and for you. This ( as you know ) is not easy to do but you've managed to do it to perfection. Great writing .

[Mel]

This poem is really good. There's a kind of sad despair to the words, mingled with hope and love. The poem can be symbolic for a lot of people. I was in love with someone, but didn't realize it until it was too late, so this poem speaks volumes for me. Great job =]