False punishments for false crimes

False punishments for false crimes

A Poem by Midnight_Mask

 

You try to make it all sound real
With the fights and the battles and even the kills
It’s disgusting how you can laugh and point
When you’re on the field in blood stained armour
 
Trying to impress the high lord master
Turning until his in your view
You should have not turned your back and made me ill
How you continue to mock the shield
 
The armour you wore was of pride and honour
You dismissed the laws and made your death longer
Not in your bed sick of life, you’re on the floor in blood and pain
And your screaming all the pleads for help in dismay
 
Remember my name after the ravens come
When they finished picking at your half living corpse
I know I might have taken it a step too far
But natures redeeming what I’ve ruined from the start
 
Now I’ll tell you what I wanted from the beginning
While you lay groaning from half your face missing
Leaning on my sword still wedged in your stomach
I begin to speak about what is coming
 
“My life is to be exterminated as soon as possible
I’ve committed a crime for being inexpert able  
You see, I wanted to get at you before I’m through
So I came to battle for kingdom and country
 Just to commit treason, to kill you”
 
Smirking at how I’ve owned up for my crime
To a dead person, twitching while lying
Lifting my view to hold a gaze with the king
I bow my head in mockery
To all those I've seen

© 2010 Midnight_Mask


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It's discussing - its disgusting
small edit

Posted 14 Years Ago


This piece is amazing. mixing treason and death into one and a very historical take on things . Loved it

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on August 5, 2009
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Midnight_Mask
Midnight_Mask

London, United Kingdom



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Hi, I am Midnight_Mask and write because that's how I express my feels and how I see life. I've wrote everything from songs, to poems, to short stories, to chapters. One of my goals is to finish a b.. more..

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