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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Do I Deserve You?

Do I Deserve You?

A Poem by Midnight_Mask
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Wishing on stars. Finding out who you are, just from making mistakes, dreaming, wishing for your aspirations to come true =]

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Wishing, I'm wishing
On a falling star
It haven't fallen far.

I'm running, just running
To that now destroyed place
From a thing that fell from space.
It's not like it meant to,
If you could be anywhere you wanted to,
Where would you be?
Would you want to see me?
Am I allowed to say, I dare?
Missing you, just makes no sense.
When I put it together,
I see I fell, from the heavens.

Hoping, I'm hoping
That I get to see that rock
Show the world what it got.

I'm laughing, just laughing
About this fairy tale chase
Everything seems out of place.
As I arrive, at the site,
I didn't see what I thought I might.
There it stood, on two feet
Glancing around, my eye caught his.
Am I allowed to say, I tried
All of these days, you lied
And now the chase is up, 
I fell on my face, because of love

I chased you here, I made a wish
And all I got, was oppertunaties
To make excuses, for what you believe in.
I don't understand how it's possible,
Do I deserve a man, someone to hold me
Like the star I deserve;
When I'm scared at night,
Hold onto my fears real tight.
I need to let go,
I need you to know,
Anyone to  know, that...

Living, I'm living
For sunrise to come,
For sunlight to greet open my eyes.

I'm breathing, just breathing
To finally see the one thing I want,
For my dreams, aspirations and wishes to come true.

If there is one thing I deserve,
Do I deserve you?

© 2010 Midnight_Mask


Author's Note

Midnight_Mask
It ended up being real long O.O
=/ sorry guys, hope you like it tho =]

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really touched my heart, love this poem jealous of your brilliant poems, keep it up keep makeing me jealous. lovin it. thank you for the chance to read something so great. really touched my heart. (try not to make it so long tho)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 19, 2010
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Midnight_Mask
Midnight_Mask

London, United Kingdom



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Hi, I am Midnight_Mask and write because that's how I express my feels and how I see life. I've wrote everything from songs, to poems, to short stories, to chapters. One of my goals is to finish a b.. more..

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