Shared thoughts

Can I have your kisses please? I want you to place them on spots my body deems secret,

Then lets trade places, can you be vulnerable enough to let me have control?

Let me warm the oil and caress you, I want to leave and impression on you mind and body 

So that that just that thought of me causes you to relax. I want my touch to be personification of trust 

and the  remembrance of my moans to be a sweet soothing melody you can feel in chest.

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Sensually alluring and enticingly provocative. Wonderfully written. Though on the light side I would like to add a qoute from the great film director of seedy Americana gross out movies, John Waters who said:

““If you go home with somebody, and they don't have books, don't f**k 'em! Don’t sleep with people who don’t read!” Now that should be on a tee shirt.

[wordman]

then you gently close that door leaving me begging for more

[Relic]

Despite errors this is nice writing that makes one want to be the receiver of the message in your words.

Nice writing.