You are like the ocean to me

If you look deep enough, you can find beauty in all. Just like the ocean, you are one of natures beauty's.

You are like the ocean to me,

A true beauty in nature for the world to see.

 

If you look beyond the surface of the water,

You will discover miracles at the depth of the ocean.

 

Even through the calm and the storms,

The ocean is a special place to be.

 

As the moonlight glistens across the water,

I see your eyes sparkling back at me.

 

Just like the breeze from the ocean,

You are a breath of fresh air to me.

 

The ocean has a special place within my soul,

That is why you are like the ocean to me.

Reviews

[Nani Mino]

nice words and great feeling . i love this poem

[PositiveMind]

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

[hanir]

I can see an ocean of creativity in your poem!
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Nicely written!!!

[PositiveMind]

Aww, that is so sweet of you. Thank you very much! :)

[Mirko Galuši..]

The piece made an impression of waves somehow to me. I felt every strophe like a wave caressing the beach, slowly pulling back, and coming back again with the other strophe. Nice! :)

[PositiveMind]

Wow, your comment almost sounds like a poem itself. It has some deep meanings attached to it. Thank you so much!

[Pete]

I like all references to nature. It speaks to us. Nice job. I just escaped to the ocean for a while and was inspired. thanks.

[PositiveMind]

Wow, lovely comment. Powerful words, thank you so much.

[Inject Positivity]

How lovely and inspiring this is.....Just awesome, the title and the poem conveys a very powerful positive message....Keep inspiring us my frnd....Great work....God bless you....Thumbs up!!!!!!

[PositiveMind]

That means so much to me, thank you! I wrote it at 2 o clock in the morning, I had a moment of inspiration. Very kind words.

[Inject Positivity]

Inspiration comes in the midst of awkward situations and times.....

[abderrahmane dakir]

So nice writing, simple but powerful. I like it so much. Thank you for sharing.

[PositiveMind]

Such lovely words. Thank you so much!

[abderrahmane dakir]

You are welcome.

[Krizito]

There's this saying, "a good poem is a joy to write and a delight to read". I definitely got that delight, keep up the great work.

[PositiveMind]

Your comment means so much to me. Thank you! Very kind.