Crush?

Crush?

A Poem by Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)

I saw him

He had black hair up to his shoulders

Dark brown eyes

But whenever he came near me

I blushed and I walked away

As fast as I could

Then today my friend

Noticed how I always act shy around him

And she went to his lunchtable

And told him that I liked him

And everyone at my table pointed at me

And I tried to hide but he still saw me

And he said

"Yea this is MY girlfriend."

He said as he hugged his girlfriend

The whole time my face was bright red

So everyone laughed because of it

And I hope you don't ever talk to me again

Because I could never deal with

The embarrassment that would flow

Through me

Then when I got back to class

I cried at my desk quietly all day

And when my friends tried to cheer me up

I smiled a bit

Then began to cry again

Because I can't deal with

The embarrassment

I'll get when I see you

And you better not look at me

One:

I do like you but, noone must know.

Two:

You have someone already

Three:

I'm too embarrassed to show my face anywhere now.

© 2010 Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)


Author's Note

Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)
This actually happened today :(

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Awww....This is exactly why I'm afraid to tell my crush how I feel. I'm afraid something like this will happen. I think you should forget about your crush. He sounds like a jerk, and besides: What do you have to lose? Anyways, he does'nt deserve someone like you anyhow Toeto-chan. I think you should move on and find a boyfriend thats ten million times better then him.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Aw! That most have gone really awful is really emabarrasing but that is how it feels and it's suck

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awww....This is exactly why I'm afraid to tell my crush how I feel. I'm afraid something like this will happen. I think you should forget about your crush. He sounds like a jerk, and besides: What do you have to lose? Anyways, he does'nt deserve someone like you anyhow Toeto-chan. I think you should move on and find a boyfriend thats ten million times better then him.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm so sorry! It sucks that this happened to you. I want to beat that guys face in! I've been rather violent lately

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww, i know what happened. You told me, but you did nice in this poem. You expressed your feeling very well. nice job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well things don't always go as you see them but the fact of having a bad day is one thing you shall over come to see upon the moonlight's shade of darkness you may feel that life is designed to flaw the young morsels shall one day see you more as the one, that will and shall brighten the globe and melt the ice, maybe one day you will see a new person in the same way as you did him, all I can say is your poem is nice but I can feel your pain as something happened to me one day that shook my foundation .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, i'm so sorry, but u can learn from ur mistakes and just tell someone u can trust about ur crush and even though ur shy, maybe u cn try to work up the nerve to have a casual conversation with jiom first and then he might tell he has a G.F. i wish u better luck next timw with ur next infatuation! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't allow it to mess with you too much. Sometime a crush open to many can grow or maybe we will know the truth. Life is many tests. We must smile and go forward and hope we have more victories then losses. A very good story. I hope thing are alright.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeeze! this is sad.
I'm sorry this happened to you,
but there is someone better,
you will find them it's inevidable.
though a sad situation,
a nice piece came from it.
[=

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh...i'm so sorry. that really sucks. your friend was probably just trying to help, but i guess sometimes, things don't always go according to plan. there's a reason they're called crushes...but they pass. if it was meant to be, it will happen. if not, then he just wasn't the right guy for you and you'll find who is in due time

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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