Fascination

Fascination

A Poem by Ana B.

Soul’s a fire. Gorgeous blue flame…

And all of it burns only around one name.

Restless in its glory…lovely in its spelling

Cause its existence is nothing if not prevailing…

 

 Looking out for this enticing caress

To know we’re not alone in loneliness

Not fully in love, but still

All the ingredients starting to whirl…

 

 

All these layers, fighting to be controlled

Never been bought, but I’m already sold.

Dancing all around for this allure

Surrounded in sludge, but feeling so pure.

 

 

 

© 2015 Ana B.


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Beautiful movement of words and thoughts.
"All these layers, fighting to be controlled
Never been bought, but I’m already sold.
Dancing all around for this allure
Surrounded in sludge, but feeling so pure."
The above lines are perfect. Feeling pure and content. A good place to be. Thank you dear Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear John for always finding the right words :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.



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Hi, Ana 🌾

It's just Richard, a simple poet, a new fan.
Not often these days one comes across a poetry writer who composes in rhyme 'n rhythm and verses that speak in spells; yet, free from muddling ambiguity … so refreshing.

"Fascination" certainly embraces the true spirit and depth of feeling that love inspires in the heart and soul, as does your well-chosen, arranged syntax of beautiful words to sing in a breath ever-so softly, I imagine, unto all you've knowingly and wisely touched in most every romantic's ideal array of desires.

I hope, in my fervor, I've not too affluently overstated my appreciation and enjoyment of your excellent work.
Thank you, Ana, for your lovely blessing. ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana B.

3 Years Ago

Hi Richard :) Your words are very much inspiring and heart warming. Thank you!!!! Stay blessed
Richard🖌

3 Years Ago

My humblest bow.
Fascinated so much that my soul is now on fire:P

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

:) sweet!!
a lovely write..:))........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you Anne :)
This poetry is beautiful and I tell you what, something happened and I started reading this in reverse. From last to first line, try that. You will sure be astound. Thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

You are right! Amazing.... ha ha, thanks M :) i sure am astounded as well now....
Straight from the heart, which is great.
Its so deep, and beautiful.
I love your rhyming, its much better then mine, I hope to someday rhyme bigger words, and still make the poem flow and sound great like this piece.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

I wouldn't worry if i were you :)
Thank you very much for the sweet words
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Haha thanks.
Your more then welcome :)
Simple and sweet! A gorgeous poem just in time for Valentine's day. I enjoyed this very much!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thanks Julie, you're very sweet :)
 "Looking out for this enticing caress
To know we’re not alone in loneliness..."
very compelling piece, your choice of words is nothing short of enticing...


Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sonnie :) I'm thrilled you liked it :)
sonnie ibadah

9 Years Ago

beautifully penned. u are welcome
I love the content and the sentiment and the text choice and colour here Ana. Loved the rhyming and the skilful use of assonance.

Only one part made me wonder about the semantics
"Restless in its glory…lovely in its spelling
Cause its existence is nothing if prevailing…" - I imagine you meant 'nothing if NOT prevailing'
perhaps a minor change e.g. -
"The existence of which is nothing if not prevailing"

Overall I got a true soul lift from the dedicated tone of this - who wouldn't want to be the muse to this great write? Well done Ana.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend for the help :) my mistake. I'm very glad you liked it :)
That was very beatiful work done here.. keep it up :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
they are really beautiful words..... wonderful poem.... i am trying again hope it will come written.... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ana B.

9 Years Ago

ha ha, yep it did :) Thank you D, for trying again ;)

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