L.O.S.T.

experimenting stuff.... a mini compilation....of sorts...

L ENITY

In the skies of my sorrow

No trespassers for a while…

Walking down my path trying to follow

That sweet light, that’s always ready to gift a smile

 

My lovely air wanderer

Keep caressing those clouds of my sky…

Some need a sun, others a conqueror

To slaughter the shadows that keep on coming by…

 

A silent gentleness

To paint one’s life in beauty

Because sometimes a small caress

Can save this world drowned in cruelty…

 

O BSESSION

 

Staring through the window

At a foreign life …

Unintentional linger

For a chat that’ll never arrive

 

Staring at the space…

Cause you’d be on my mind

That familiar stranger with no face

Tickling my sanity, that I’ve carefully designed

 

Staring into the night

At this disturbing intrusion in my life…

Dreaming of a forbidden delight

After all, you already have a wife…

 

S ANITY

 

Midnight waltzes

In the cemetery of my dreams

What are the chances

To resurrect those foolish things…

 

That are causing that sweet intoxication

Making me paint a lazy sky…

Life is tiresome, with every tiny fraction

Never really wondering why…

 

Why the God of Lightning

Has blessed the parting heavens…

Death is not as frightening

As it is the Life’s disturbing presence…

 

T IDE

 

Light and darkness

In eternal disparity…

Life is joy. Life is sadness.

Ends and begins with frightening regularity

 

The boy I loved…

The gravity I’ve beaten…

Heartache undeserved

Forever in my soul is written…

 

Time melting my days

Wave after wave…

And me, looking for the ways

To beat my fears…without being brave…

 

 

Reviews

[Mayank]

Whoa! That has to be one of the best thing I read today. You have written so well, it's like a journey, the feelings structured here happens to almost everyone. This description is like a realization.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the best words Mayank :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A epic journey into thoughts and emotions in the poem. I like the way you told the story in the poetry. Allowed the reader to feel the struggle, thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you John for stopping by in my lil world :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[RAOrourke]

Wonderful...loved the rhythm and the layout! Great job

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Well, a new meaning of lost, its structure is very attractive, nicely done

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Simon Welsh]

I like it. Very different.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Basu Gupta]

Completely new for me..very well composed and expressed the emotion well.
The combination, although, took it to another higher standard..
Thanks for sharing

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for appreciation :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Wow, Ana, this is very good, you know. A series of poems that connect so wonderful. One of your best, I think. Well done. :) Rudi

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Rudi :)

[Misery]

Dear Ana, you have managed to fit a queen's ransom worth of jewels into this 'mini compilation of sorts'.
Here are two of them that placed a heavy hand upon my soul's shoulder:

"Death is not as frightening
As it is the Life’s disturbing presence…"

"Life is joy. Life is sadness.
Ends and begins with frightening regularity"

Deep thoughts, carefully chosen words, and that ever-present mocking undercurrent...the trademarks of an Ana B. creation.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for thinking so Kevin, i must admit it's been a while since i've written something. This is the first thing i did so it may bea little rusty....i'm very glad you liked it!

[Misery]

You are always welcome.
I am glad you have continued to compose your creations.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much, i'm also glad :)

[B]

I love the reference to the conqueror ....
The perfect man would conquer all with his wit and intelligence
I love the poem and the division you have placed within it
Makes you think and ponder
The obsession part is my favorite
If i do not feel obsessed then the guy is not the right one

Great job :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the insight Nisreena :)

[Emily]

I love it!
It inspires me!!
Keep it up!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily!