Oracular ferments

Sweet wars

In driver-less cars…

No remorse

Can be found under the stars.

 

Age is a strange thing…

Seemingly homodox

But look at the wine and milk

And find out where fate dissolves

 

And gives you the reign.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[LylaCrystal]

A great poem as always. I like the image you used to accompany your words. It truly gives the impression of a traveler wandering through his mind and sharing his thoughts with the reader. Great job, Ana!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Lyla for the lovely words)) hugs!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Ana. Old world is moving and changing too fast. I liked your words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the beautiful words John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Ana.

[Misery]

Dear Ana,
these words bring me wonderment. There is a benign conflict betwixt...
my false impression and your true intent.
Do love your imagery, for I always love your carefully chosen imagery, but must needs plead ignorance to the origin and destination of this dear poem. Forgiveness please.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Kevin, no worries :)

[Tony Jordan]

At first glance I thought oracular was ocular (as in Oculus Rift) and thought this to be a technophiles idea of heaven with VR headsets and its drone motorcars.
But Google was my friend and I see that oracular relates to the ancient source of wisdom.
Coming of age was then my thoughts and how the wine will get better but the milk will sour with age and thus with age the wine will reign - although you'll not get as much cheese from vino.
Certainly not as much cheese as a T.J. review eh?

A departure from your trademark Ninth Dan rhyming. A cheeky wee number with an excellent bouquet on the nose here Ana. :DD

[Ana B.]

hahaha, certainly indeed!

well, 9 is one of my favorite numbers :) besides, i was half alseep when i wrote this :) so these may be considered confessions of a lunatic :D Thank you, Tony. Smooth landing in the weekend?

[Ana B.]

lol, definitely :D

[Tony Jordan]

Mr ReadMore has struck ...lol
There can only be one Ninth Dan of rhyme alive at any one time - so don't go anywhere okay !! ;P

Lunatic schmunatic - that I could write this oHow is your weekend treating you Ana?
r even conceive of it in my lost lucid moments haha.

Smooth like Sully in the Hudson my friend...

How's your weekend treating you Ana?

I can't wait to see the new Trainspotting film lol.

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - take that Mr.Readmore .. heh heh

[Ana B.]

well, i am in the process of writing and can't find the fitting song to it.....

rest, all is peachy and pancakie :)

[Tony Jordan]

Ah but the joys of searching for that one piece of music - mind you don't fall down a Youtube black hole.
Glad you are peachy-keen jelly-bean and don't take no crepe from anybody ya hear !! lol

[Ana B.]

hahahha, oh, will so do that :) yet nothing feels like falling in the black hole, stay warm and full of candies in the reach my friend

[Surya]

A message hidden and a great write.
Thank you for sharing.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for reading :)

[Michael S]

A lovely poem to read on..beautifully written :-)

[Ana B.]

Thank you, Michael :)

[Michael S]

My pleasure!