Out Of The Blue

Out Of The Blue

A Poem by RED
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I tried as possibly as I could to describe an indescribable person.

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Out of the blue, she came.
We were identically the same.
I cannot forget her name.
Damn, I was lame.
I could not hold tight on her.
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She was rare.
But, did she really care?!
I tried to open my heart.
But, it was shut hard.
It was not a crime.
Yes, it was as bitter as lime.
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Out of the blue, she came.
In my mind, carved her name.
Was it just a game?!
I should not have tried putting her in the frame.
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Out of the blue, she came.
Will we ever meet again?!
On the hall of fame, maybe?!
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All what I wanted to say is: "STAY"!!

© 2015 RED


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RED
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I like the fact that you portray your feeling very strongly. If she doesn't come I'm sure you will find someone who is made just for you. The one who will Stay. Good luck and keep writing beautiful poems like this.


Posted 8 Years Ago


RED

8 Years Ago

Thanks, I sincerely appreciate your words, letter by letter.

Who knows if she will c.. read more
I love poems Like this man it's amazing. I can feel the love and anger in it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RED

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.
I really appreciate it.
This is a very well written poem. I like the sense of urgency you give it, you relate it well to the reader. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RED

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading it, and I am glad you liked it. :)

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Amman, Abu Nsair, Jordan



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