All Out of Wine (originally titled Champagne)

Dark scars. Cold breath. It’s lonely inside my head.

Quiet house. Pale skin. Time to open the Box again.

Clammy hands. Freckled nose. Here’s to standing on my tippy-toes.

Reviews

[slfisher89]

The use of punctuation gives the feel of staccato, scattered thoughts. Yet a slightly humorous ending; which changes the melancholic tone from the earlier lines.

[Andrew M Parker]

I am happy you liked my piece, thanks again for the terrific feedback. :))