Memories

Inspired by andrew Mitchell's Timelessness of being

Memories
(Senryu)

Built to dwell in mind
Memories, time shared castles
Endure a lifetime.

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Memories
( septolet)


Human mind
Builds memories,
that endures
lifetime

Those time shared
Castles belong
to none.

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Memories
(Cinquain)

Imprints,
Human mind builds.
endure many lifetimes,
fugacious time capsules of none.
Memoirs

Reviews

[Veki]

Perfectly arranged.
Every living species can connect with it.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you very much. I appreciate your visit.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. Perfect gift of knowledge shared. Thank you Mrudula for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you John. I appreciate your kind words very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed these poems and you are welcome my friend.

[Mrudula Rani]

Uma abraço ( a hug).

[Onlyme]

Beautiful done, 3 different styles about the same subject. Done to perfection.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you. What a wonderfully kind review!

[Onlyme]

Just honest sweet. And your very welcome. 🙂

[Paul Bell]

Fugacious is now my new buzzword.
Passage of time.
Memories are the real importance of life.
How you doing.

[Mrudula Rani]

Not too well Paul. I am dealing with mountain of saudades and an incurable jet lag.Thank you for your wonderful comments.

[Paul Bell]

Jet lag sucks.

[Crowley]

This was really cool, the same title and subject in three different forms. Intriguing and really well written. All of them. But I think my fave is the septolet!! Great work!!

[Mrudula Rani]

I love Your visits and reviews, they are a treat. Thank you very much.

[barleygirl]

Nothing I love more than learning a new word: fugacious . . . it's such an expressive word choice! *smile* I love to watch you play with words & poetic forms, becuz you're obviously having fun. I especially love that you combine three poems on the page with just the right amount of connective tissue to tie them together. I also love the phrase: "time shared castles" (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you Querida Margie, my favorite pastime is spending time on WC, I have such a fun reading wonderful writers like you,and your reviews are the icing on the cake. Thank you for your wonderful reviews. Uma abraço.

[emmajoy]

What a Brilliance of words, Mrudula! Each part results in the poetic sense it should, each part achieves its rule.. wonderful, truly wonderful!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you. ( bonita Emmajoy) beautiful Emmajoy, I love your visits and appreciate your lovely words very much. Abraço ( hug)

[Chris Shaw]

Well done M. Clever writing. Fugacious, what a great word.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you C, your reviews are as lovely as your smile.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Clever and profoundly perceptive.
A splendid post, M!

[Neville]

impressive or what... yes very, say's me...... and truer than true, if you ask me... N x

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear Neville. Happy friends day ( Dia de amigo) in Brasil. Abraço

[Neville]

My very sincere pleasure my Friend and the same to you... Happy Friends day too........ N