It Was Within His Arms She Blossomed

It Was Within His Arms She Blossomed

 

 

It was within his arms

she blossomed,

where the effulgence of sunlight

braided tendrils of copper hair,

where the circumference of her mouth met his

and love began

the falling into.

 

 

 

 

photography by Shane Scribner

Reviews

[Trace]

WOW, this is just perfect.

love the last line. Very uniquely expressed

Huggs, Trace

[Kelly Scheppers]

...a hug right back at ya, Trace! Thank you!

[Eugene Finley]

It's beautiful; that moment when a person falls in love - it so often happens while holding them in your arms.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...sometimes, it happens with that first look, too...you just know!! Thank you, Eugene!

[sereenaoutloud]

Kelly girlie this is stunning.!! Sorry if i am repeating myself in your reviews but it is true!!
Love last line 'the falling into" Made me sigh ..just beautiful! :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...that last line pretty much presented itself...sometimes, things just happen, and I am blessed! So kind of you to say...

[dan]

Kelly, So much warmth wrapped in emotion existing within this breathtaking piece. Every love has that magic moment, the point of no return, where it all seems to just CLICK. "...and love began the falling into," may be the best way I've ever seen that moment illuminated. You are both different in your styles, but MsJewel and yourself seem to have the greatest grasp on the sensual seductiveness of the process, the falling into. But since this is YOUR review, I'll have to say this...(whisper...shh....you're just THIS MUCH better 8^)) take care...dan

[Kelly Scheppers]

Julie and I go back to our days at Starlite...she's quite an accomplished writer with a following all her own. That's where I got my start, 15 years ago! You always thrill me with your reviews, Dan...thank you most kindly for this one! ...how is Dee?

[dan]

Dee is more stable but still having trouble with the coughing and shortness of breath. They WERE shooting for today to let her come home but now it looks like Wednesday or Thursday...maybe. And now I'VE got a flu bug which makes the situation that much more delightful. It seems like she and I are getting OLD all at once. Thank you for asking! take care...dan

[Richard🖌]

Some things are so stimulating and arousing they literally stun the senses …

I love the gentle elegance of your presentation as a whole … the copper hair, color choice, and font, and the layout is gorgeously sigh-worthy; not only are you a brilliant poetess, you are a very special lady, and one helluva splendid woman!

This is as good a Free Verse, presentation, moment, and pull of emotion sensuality as it gets … thank you for sharing, Kelly! ~ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

One could never say you are a man of few words...I adore this, thank you, Richard! x

[Richard🖌]

Aw, you're welcome, Kelly!

[ANTO]

I was reminded of the much used term between lovers - 'You complete me." - Kelly.
They bring out the very very best in us because we give to them and they to us. We become a beacon of light for the world in that state.
This is beautiful. I really got a huge sigh from this one.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poetry.
:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I would share my swing with you, Anto...you're just that kind of guy! It comes through, you know! Many thanks!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Kelly you have such a wonderful way with sensual romantic emotion in your poetry! Blissful and gently erotic and so yummy to digest!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...I like the emphasis on "yummy"...thank you, John!

[R Smith]

Your words are so sweet Kelly, i can taste the beauty of them, running fingers through those braided tendrils of copper hair, absolute heaven as are the final lines, superb writing dear girl, just brilliant :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your generosity overwhelms me, Richard...thank you!

[AaronFreitas]

Such beautiful words Kelly... reading your words gives me faith in a beautiful love... I swear! haha

[Kelly Scheppers]

You couldn't have said anything better, Aaron...thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"and love began/ the falling into"

beautiful lines...

such passionate imagery....

love it.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I appreciate that, Jacob...thank you.