Drug Fixation.

Chemically imbalanced
                    Membranes gone insane

My thoughts

Drip

Down

Like

Molassess

Static-up-reception
(Making sense a thing of the past)

No longer
Not here
No more

To think
          This is
               What happens
                             When I walk
          Right
                  Past

You.

Author's Note

I like this one. Describes how I feel at the moment. Nixing the negative, of course.
Say what you will.

Reviews

[Dietrich von Crowe]

Safe to say it's concrete? I like the dripping imagery enhanced by vertical one liners :).
And the last bit where you repeat the walking image with moving lines, and then it repeats itself seems to connect with your desire to have that "drug fixation"; as in you step back again to get another fix.
Static-up-reception...hm...

[poetic soul]

classy!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very creative! I like how scattered the words are and you use them well! Very erratic! This piece interests me a lot!

[Bella]

This is great! The format is so unique. Great write!
"My thoughts

Drip

Down

Like

Molassess"

So descriptive! I really feel like I can relate to the feeling written about here.

[Butterflymom]

I think this was delightfully written! Brillant.