Call me crazy

Call me crazy

A Poem by NaCl

Call me crazy

But his ice blue eyes make me melt

Call me crazy

But his fire red hair makes me freeze

Call me crazy

But his inviting looks scare me sensleless

Call me crazy

But every word is a lyric

Every syllable a note

Every sentence is a poem

Call me crazy

He would never go

For the girl in the corner

Looking over her shoulder

Making sure no one is there

To notice her

© 2011 NaCl


Author's Note

NaCl
Hey, so this is about one of the two guys I like, so if you hear a poem about a totally different guy, I'm not insane or a slut, I just really like them.

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Well there you go . . . Crazy, I adore you! x

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like your poem. There was typo with the word senseless but that's about all. I tend to go for more flowing poetry but the clear (I'm not sure how to spell it) you have here is elegant. I really connected with it.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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NaCl
NaCl

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