Patterns

Patterns

A Poem by NaCl

The wind is a rolling

Heavy sound

Blue and grey

Except on a summers day

The sun has no pattern

It is scattered

And empty

How can I explain

I see what others do not

Feel what should be impossible

Words were never enough

I cannot bend them just right

To tell you that the following line is tight

Concise and clear

While this one is open

A vessel for my tears

© 2011 NaCl


Author's Note

NaCl
I could never explain this to people, everyone thinks I'm insane.

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Good job! It's really well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very insightful piece, Ms. Salt.

I enjoyed reading it. Very emotional and figurative, I like that it let the reader think about what it meant for them, rather than just telling them flat-outwhat the meaning behind it is.

Bravo.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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