Wow.... Your poems are really deep and sad, but, the pain in them makes them special, and I love to read them. I really liked the theme of this poem. It takes a lot of strength in one, to face the sadness and problem, with a smile on their face. It's just marvellous!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Yes you are right, I am glad that you understood the exact meaning I wanted to convey. Thank you so .. read moreYes you are right, I am glad that you understood the exact meaning I wanted to convey. Thank you so much.
I do believe that it takes a long process and a willing mind to see sadness as equal as happiness. In this poem, you revealed how matured you are in thinking about life difficulties. Nicely done. :)
Sometimes this is how we will make our mind and heart to be occupied with the sad feelings.There are times where there's only the company of sadness that we are left with. Beautiful poem
Very VERY nice!
You have written true and raw emotions in this piece.
11/10.
I guess theres nothing but sadness to replace the happiness that was taken from us.
Well done Najam I truly have enjoyed reading this.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I am truly happy to know that you liked it. Thank you so much.
Woah... very dark and deep...
This really reminds me of a person in my school, who moved recently to this school, and always sits by himself and doesn't talk , and when I asked him why, he said he's used to being by himself as no one in his old school wanted to be with him... soo sad :(
This poem is really well worded and engaging as well....
Awesome!!!
Keep it up
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it. :)
That's a deep pain one could sense..
But smile at them and wave them.....it's hard I know...
But life awaits for a new second and new life..just matter of time...
Hope one day you will be fine...and that I will be glad for your happiness...
I loved your every word.....:)
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