A star among many

A STAR AMONG MANY

I was a star for my parents,

They named me one.

I brought light to their lives

I felt warm with them; they are my sun.

I lost the major ray of sunshine,

She was my mum.

She drifted away from me,

Every day was a light year

And my life a black hole.

My starlight has lost the source to reflect, 

I, a star wishes to see a star,

Waiting for a falling star to wish upon,

My wish is fulfilled when the comet falls.

For I hope my mother will fall for me as a shooting star.

I wish that my life is filled with galaxy of happiness,

In which a tiny star I remain.

Reviews

[Vicky]

A beautiful concept, and I like the photo. So sad though. Leaves me feeling somber.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.

[Gabby The GAB]

The feels. great write! :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much 😊

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Sometimes a tiny star can shine the brightest in the darkest places.You wish for a galaxy of happiness and it starts with tiny stars like you.

[Najam Us Saher]

You make me smile. Thank you very much for such heartfelt words. 😊

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

You are welcome

[Vidit V Kumar]

Such a beautiful star you are. Good one:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much ☺

[Anjali]

The creativity.... You can feel it in the poem.... It's radiating so much! The way you wrote some lines are so beautiful. It's amazing!!

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me really happy. Thank you so much :)

[Anjali]

Haha.. you are very welcome

[Suhd]

Good one. Liked this poem !

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[k.s.]

I love how you relate your family to stars and outer space and how painfully beautiful this poem is. Thanks for sharing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading. Every appreciation means a lot.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thats sooo true and beautiful Piece........

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. You made my day 😀

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wowiee That is a lovely read..I loved it so much

[Najam Us Saher]

Overwhelmed to know that.
You have my greatest gratitude. 😀

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words shared. I liked your thoughts and you remember your mother. A heart felt poem shared my friend. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I am really happy to know that you liked it. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.