Smouldering Horizons

Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss

Beating hearts between us feeling so close
Wanting you so much, thoughts to engross.
Desire alive within soft splendorous airs
Caught in a tender embrace forever shared

Silent, foreboding washing away life
Deepening greys destructive sickening strife
Cries of the night birds fill the darkened hue
Glimmering delights shine refelections of you

We are intimately touching in so many ways
Loving sighs always end our divided days

 

Reviews

[Bubo]

A stunningly beautiful romantic piece, of deep emotions , and days are endeed divided making it sad too..........

Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Such strong imagary..........and the picture captures the beauty of the thought.

[pal]

soft.. tender... subtle emotions.. feel soothing fresh reading through..

good poem.
pal

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very lovely poem, nicely written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[John Parker]

Abesolutely wonderful piece.....sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing it........keep those read request coming........

[H. A. M.]

PSSST! Gary H sent me.
I see the similarity in this one. It's like a compliment to the other one and runs well together.
Good write.

[TL Boehm]

beautifully done. A wonderful companion piece, you and Gary H

[Joseph - Michael]

That was so nice and it flown so simple as well. I really did enjoyed it very much so. Also, you sure picked the right picture to go with the writing, a well matches...

It's all good, so no worries at all...

[Jenny Davis]

I just read Gary's and I can see why you two write together...this is stunning...it's like looking at a painting in the sun's morning rays...there is something about having someone at the end of the day that washes away all the strife...you have expressed this tremendously well...wow :)

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Together/apart...stunningly sensual and riveting, filled with joyous imagery, I sooooooo identify with this...
Off to read the collaboration...
Helen:-)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely sentiments for those that are afar from their loved ones. Just beautiful. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Scirrocco]

Absolutely beautiful in it's meaning Nat! I'm going to have my fianc� read this one!