Fast Love

Fast Love

A Poem by Nathan1289

Some people are lucky to find.......

This is a story at the apex of love, it's not happily ever after although it fits like a glove.

Can I paint you by numbers in a magical place?
Can I study your features till time falls away? 

I know that you care by the squeeze of your hand.
I know that our memories are castles in the sand.

As the snow starts to fall and the icicles form,
we drift to  summer in the golden fields of corn.

The breeze starts to warm and the barley leaves sway.
Bound by the summer nights, we drift, float and melt away.

I know our love is destined to burn brightly and fast,
this is the relationship you dream of, although you know it won't last.

Can I paint you a picture of happiness in shapes?
Can I kiss you in slow motion as we play our mix tapes? 

I know when the music ends, so does our story, but this poem lives on, our moment of glory.

© 2012 Nathan1289

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awesome, amazing piece of beautiful writing. I am your fan already :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Love the use of setting in expressing your ideas and the tragedy of it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Definitely a great piece I love the sensual take on the subject.
and your phrasing is very steady. solid bit of writing here...

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 16, 2012
Last Updated on March 16, 2012



Manchester, United Kingdom

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