Rest In Peace.....?

The Funeral.....

The air was cold and I wrapped my arms around myself to keep warm.

I was dressed in black but that didn’t help much. I was practically shivering…

 

I looked around. The cemetery looked damp. Everybody was mourning. That’s what people do when people die…..

 

I stood away from everybody else. I didn’t have the courage to look at the crying faces or the lifeless body….

 

I looked down at my hands. They were pale. My whole body was. Maybe all the crying had its effect.

 

“Clara…..”

I heard my name being called out softly…………

 

I looked in the direction of the voice. It was my mom.

 

Then I heard violent & emotional screams as the body was lowered into the grave……..

“Clara…. dear…. Why did you leave us?

Why…… oh God…..don’t be so cruel…

Give her back…….please……”

 

Yes, you heard her right. It’s my Funeral………..

                                           

Author's Note

I know its weird....
Its my second attempt at Horror....
Please say how you feel about this......:)

Reviews

[duff]

Emotionally powerful with the twist. The mood spikes when the screaming starts and things get elevated to a whole different level after that. Content like this is a fun read so thanks for sharing.

[Zephyr]

You are welcome....
Am glad you enjoyed and will soon return the favour...:)

[Surya]

I feel wow after it, I loved how you described....I loved it...:)

[Zephyr]

And I loved the review...:)
Thank you so much.....

[Surya]

My plsr...:)

[Sofia]

Its just perfect...When I was reading it..I got a slight hint that it might be the girl's funeral..but then I felt i might be wrong...a brilliantly written piece :)

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Sofia....
Happy to read the review, Dear.....:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

I wish if this will be more longer..because that was a very good twist..

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much....
I thought of writing a longer piece but decided against it as I thought the essence will be gone....

[Wajiha Nayeem]

omg...this was a shocking one...i loved this!!!....

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Wajiha...
A shocking review...:)

[Stacy Purvis]

I'd like to see you add more to this.
The plot twist was perfect.

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Anastasia...:)
I thought of writing more but I thought the essence will be gone

[Gee]

Looking on from the outside as a spirit. I have myself, just now, posted a piece of a similar nature. How weird is that ???

[Zephyr]

Its a weird coincidence...:)
It has happened to me twice!

[Gee]

SPOOKY..........