grief in my tears

i have been left here...
so alone..
so depressed...
so shattered..
a heart has been broken...
like a frozen ice glass...
shrouds everywhere ...
bleeding the eternal tears of sorrow...


left alone...
after u went back to him...
no care for my feelings...
u stepped over my heart...
after i surrendered and fallen apart...

under the sky i walk alone...
with the tears are dropping from it...
dead forests ...frozen roots...
tilling my tale...
with loneliness...

am sitting inside my frozen room...
after I've been left alone...
the hope u gave...
the faith u made...
all gone away with a blow from the wind of solitude...

all have been told...
all have been writing...
on the wall of my destiny...
to be alone...
left alone...
with no one to care about...
and nothing to fill my heart...
my shattered heart...
my broken heart

u left my kingdom...
after what I've built for u...
after u entered my heart
captured my mind...
and stole my soul...
left it burning ...
with tears and pain...
left nothing but ashes...

from my shattered heart...
after i loved u...
u break my heart..
after i couldn't imagined my life without u...
u left me alone...
between the walls of solitude..
with nothing but the shadows of ur image dancing infront of me...
with nothing but the whispers of ur voice...still echo in my mind...

after all of that...
u left me...
and i loved u...
thanks for the pain...
thank u for the suffering...

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

another excellent write, this is very descriptive, i can relate

[waleed blacko]

well thnx alot for ur wishes...and about the last line...its thank you for the suffering...the S was miss typing :D

[poetic soul]

wow!!!!
such awesome depiction of pain...
so much pain can a little heart hold...
nothing can say it better!!!
loved it to bits!!!
hope your pain is soon soothed!!

jus a pointed, the last line,
either it is:
thank you for the suffering
or
thanks for the suffering!