as death coming near me

the whispers of the shadows..
shadows from the once lost time..
whispering within my once again dead mind..
mocking my well to survive...
my hope to stay alive..
we are what remain within...
we are the truth...
not a daydream or a fading fantasy..
for ur unwanted destiny...

here now i shall remain...
standing feeling my heart beats within my veins...
my once again lost heart...
seeking reflection of the truth...
of the once again dead hopes...
on the shores of the once again frozen river...


here now i shall remain...
at the very corner of my cold cage..
motionless...
while the walls are closing over my empty corpse..
having no strength to run
or even to fight...

sitting there...
watching the dancing shadows of my...
my once forgotten time..
seeking the truth..
seeking an answer...
for a questions once tortured me...
tortured my fragile soul..
while am sitting there motionless...
at the shores of the once again frozen river..
seeking nothing except reflections...
of the once again lost time...

all shall remain the same...
as death coming near me...

Reviews

[waleed blacko]

thnx alot for ur review my friend :)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i really like this poem, your use of words, i love