happy ending

every time i take a look into the sky...
i see the stars shining in a strange way...
no explanation for what i see...
except that my end is near...

no hope no faith no strength
like an empty veil i walk alone
with nothing except despair fills
the empty hollowness with my fragile mind

lost..with no one to seek...
wandering with no one to speak..
except the fallen ghost of the past time..
who is aiding me with my search..
for the once known time,..

once again the road leads me
to the forgotten lake of the lost time
which is covered by the clouds of a dead memories
which once inherited my blackened mind
seek the truth...seek the answers...
which am confused why...

why should i fight alone...
or should i surrender and never try...
to fill my empty veil
with nothing except despair?
an answer i was seeking for a long time...
but suddenly i realized...
there is no hope from fighting again
no way to figure out
left here alone
with no power left to fight
with no more hope to survive..
for the last time
i breathe my last breath
from my once again dead chest...
that's what i call a happy ending....

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[poetic soul]

left here alone
with no power left to fight
with no more hope to survive..
for the last time
i breathe my last breath
from my once again dead chest...
that's what i call a happy ending....

uhh!!! dark dark dark...
hits hard....rite on the head and makes you feel dizzy...thats what yo poem did!!!
superb!!!
keep it rolling!

:) Smiles,
Krishna