SAD

 

 

SAD

Why so sad

My little one?

The laughter lines

Have all but gone

I promise

You need never be

Alone again

 

 

 

Reviews

[Silmara McGarry]

It is amazing to me how you can say so much with so little words, but that is how good you are! The emotion within and the hope in the end, at first the word sad made me think of why? But the laughter lines are there to show that is so very possible to be happy...and we are never really alone ;-)

Well done dear :-))))

[Neville]

How very kind .. many huge thank you's my friend ..

:)

[Silmara McGarry]

You are most welcome my friend :-)

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Nicely done comfortIng of wound soyl. I an sure your words have power to save someone. Well done.

[Neville]

Thank you Broken english, much appreciated...

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You welcome

[R J Askew]

I was drawn to this I have feel I have suffered SAD this past month because of 30 odd days of grey cold. I will check to see if my laughter lines have changed any. The poem makes a key promise because being alone is like living without the sunshine which only another can provide in most of our lives.

[Neville]

As always, I look forward and welcome your opinion Ron, thank you my Friend