Mastication

Mastication

A Poem by Neville

Mastication

 


His shirt swallowed her


And as he watched her masticated


She smiled and took a selfie for all her exe’s

 

© 2021 Neville


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Dear Neville I have read this a few times now and left it chewing over in my mind before responding. There is something very seductive about a woman wearing a man's shirt. My other half is a leg man, so he appreciates shirts worn this way exposing lengthy legs. You know that final line is a killer. Why would she be taking a selfie for all her exes I ask, especially dressed in a man's shirt? She's up to no good methinks.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


Bang on Chris ... I have a more risqué version going round in my head .. for another day, m.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Looking forward Neville to the follow up :) You can do it, I know you can :)



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all her exes? She is something isn't she :) still seductive delightful read, I always think wearing my man's shirt is special, intimate passionate and yes seductive ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


what can a bloke say except thank you .. and go overboard with his emphasis on how much he m.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

Truly, truly and true You are so truly welcome dearest Mr. Neville :)
I'm seeing the symbol of "wearing his shirt" to represent the kind of person who throws him/herself into a relationship with too much self-effacing vigor & these are the ones at danger of being chewed up and spit out by relationship(s) *sigh!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


.............. cheers Margie .. seriously appreciated (NUGS) fondly, Neville
interesting Nev! would never have thought of mastication of a sexy scene .. at first I thought he was still in the offending shirt ... naughty me .. then I thought of a female Hannibal Lector .. yeow! ah but then .. there she is .. putting on his shirt .. sexy girl .. getting a little revenge on the exes ...mastication .. such a strong word .. strange coupling says i .. and rhymes with.......... oh ........ never mind. :))))))))))))))))
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


thanks for the update Gene, I do appreciate .. cheers n take care ... Sunday about 13.00hrs .. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

down our necks buddy :)))))))))))))))))))))))))
Neville

3 Years Ago


................ its a date mate :))))
You are such a cynic Nev, thinking that's why they take selfies in other guys shirts. Those lovelies wouldn't know the meaning of revenge even if it did cross their minds, which it so obviously didn't, because they are all delightful angels and you most surely be mistaken.
Ps... Legally, I think I got out of that one okay 😊


Posted 3 Years Ago


Dear Neville I have read this a few times now and left it chewing over in my mind before responding. There is something very seductive about a woman wearing a man's shirt. My other half is a leg man, so he appreciates shirts worn this way exposing lengthy legs. You know that final line is a killer. Why would she be taking a selfie for all her exes I ask, especially dressed in a man's shirt? She's up to no good methinks.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


Bang on Chris ... I have a more risqué version going round in my head .. for another day, m.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Looking forward Neville to the follow up :) You can do it, I know you can :)

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