Someone More Golden

Someone More Golden

 

Have you ever wondered

how it might feel to be no one

to be nowhere and nothing

..

Unknown and unloved

not just presumed missing

but gone and completely

..

Well that is precisely how I feel

this autumn, having been dismissed

and exchanged for someone more golden

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Exchanged for someone more golden
Now that sounds like being relegated to second fiddle and that is not a good feeling. Been there and done that and got out of it too. This little poem is a sad reminder of broken romance.

Chris

[Neville]

Ssh it happens & his middle name was Midas ............................ :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Having never been golden myself- I'll save a couple of chairs for those who want to sit along side of me in the corner and watch the show. :)

[Neville]

I wonder whether they will be as grateful as me ..

[Cherrie Palmer]

Hurry up and sit down. I got you a box of cracker jacks

[Neville]

.. make me feel special why dont'cha :)

[Gee]

It must only be good being the "best thing since.." until the next " best thing since. . " comes along.
Like these words Neville :)
Good morning, hope you are all okay

[Neville]

you just put a spring in my step my friend and it's still only 08.43 and early winter ......... cheers mate I feel like Zebedee from the magic roundabout ....... I wonder what happened to him eh' x
ps .. not too bad hope you n the gang are safe n well

[Gee]

All good thanks.
I would imagine Zebedee must be a rusting memory in a BBC cupboard. (if it was the BBC and not Anglia)

[Neville]

Good to hear ... is Anglia still going even :)

[John the Baptist]

Has the strong sound of a dumping. What can I say? We've all been there. It hurts when it happens, but sometimes time and distance can disclose it was for the best.

[Neville]

too bloomin write you are sir John .........good job it was all in me head and just kinda slipped outa me pen ................................ cheers mate :)