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just messin about with numbers.. I had a surplus of sevens and fives

Remote

 

I do so miss you

But the return key just broke

So let it be, love

 

 

Reviews

[AJNJ]

We can go on and on and on about how much we miss another. Yet where there’s no will, there’s no way. I personally feel that the past is the past for a reason and once moved on, it’s better left where it is. On a remote shelf, vaguely somewhere. I can go on and on but I’ll just say this is so cleverly written sir! Enjoyed!

[Neville]

thanks my friend.. much appreciated and then some...

[AJNJ]

An interesting senryu! You’re welcome :)

[Neville]

then I haiku again sen :)

[AJNJ]

You must! ..... :)

[Neville]

…….. :) N

[Lorry]

Flip! Just said in last review neededto watch up pompei again an now need to listen to let it be. You're much better than that snooty ask jeeves bloke 😀
Have an image of a heart shaped box full of broken return keys. Nice visual art included at no extra cost... Bargain mate.

[Neville]

that'll do nicely sir, dont bother to wrap them, I'll take it as seen ......................... 😀

[Ken Simm.]

No way I could pass this without relating it to myself. And it fits perfectly.
Kierkergard said that Life can only be understood backwards. But must be lived forwards.

[Neville]

.......... Good old Soren.. he was more than just a philosopher and poet dont'cha know .. We had to do him.. not literally you understand at uni coz he was one of the first, if not the very first of the existentialists ... Satre as ya mean to go on, I say .. and do feel free to read some more Ken, cheers :)

[Robert Trakofler]

love can hinge on many things nev but the return key! that's some serious fate my friend. "Son you were born because my return key broke that summer"

[Neville]

...... sounds about write Cheers Rob me old mate :)

[Unspoken poet]

awesome haiku, very well written.....

[Neville]

Thank you choosen…..Kay-T :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i cannot return to what i was before you...and there are no returns like in a Walmart purchase...
so the first time has to be the last time...and a lasting time.
excellent senryu here.
j.

[Neville]

Thank you so very bloomin much Jacob sir.. much more than just bigly appreciated and true.
read moreThank you so very bloomin much Jacob sir.. much more than just bigly appreciated and true.

N.

[Norman 223]

Your haiku Neville
Implies that there is no key
To unlock this door.

N.

[Neville]

The door is not locked, it was gently closed to keep the heat in and the draught out :)
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The door is not locked, it was gently closed to keep the heat in and the draught out :)
Many haiku's to ya sir Norm.. I sincerely hope you and yours are well my friend and that soon you will be able to enjoy greater freedoms as they are incrementally permitted …

AGT's Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Clever Neville. "But the return key just broke". That's an excuse for saying, forget it. Good title. That's the way you want it to stay, distant. No second chances. A fine little 5 -7 -5

Chris

[Neville]

a mighty big TA to ya Chris :)

[Ana Papaya]

I read it as a lovely no return policy on love.

[Neville]

you are very good at this aren't you.. I bet you have played this game before... do ya wanna sticka :)

[Ana Papaya]

Of course I do. :) A star?
Is there a reward if I fill up my card?

[Neville]

of course.... name it :)

[Ana Papaya]

Ok. :) Let me think of something good!

[Neville]

I got all the time in the world :)