Woollen Stockings

Woollen Stockings

A Poem by Neville

Woollen Stockings

 

He found her

sitting by the roadside

knitting

 

Woollen stockings

while her mother dyed them

pretty colours

 

In old

traditional village style

mid the blue and yellow bee hives

 

Of course

her father had to make a living too

so made honey and shoed ponies

 

By the roadside

while his daughter

knitted woollen stockings

 

Bought by those poor, rich men tourists

for their wives and for their girlfriends

those forced to sit all day behind computers ..


 

© 2020 Neville


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A very visual scene of perhaps an African village. A hive of almost cottage industry taking place here. The whole family playing their part so they can afford to live their simple lives. I imagine them all smiling as they earned their daily bread. The final stanza had me smiling too. Yes, they would probably be very content with what they'd got and no doubt would imagine a 9-5 day behind a computer screen hell. Would I wear them? Why not? Keep you warm in winter.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago




You are indeed very astute Chris .. thank you
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

I'll be accepting that as a compliment then :)



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Remember wool? Does anyone wear wool anymore? Maybe it's more common in other places, but in Cali, we are into cooler cotton, even on the chilliest winter day. Also, lots of Cali folks don't own socks. Other than this cultural rift, I love how your poem honors the old ways. I wuz just thinking about how work-intensive life used to be when we butchered our home-raised meat & had to go thru the labor of processing all those various parts for later enjoyment. Speaking of woolen stockings, remember when people would darn socks instead of throwing them away when they got holes? So much is brought to mind by your simple love-filled sentiments (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Hugs appreciated Margie .. wot do ya mean used to darn their socks .. (YARND) fondly, N :)<.. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

Laughing . . .
Delightful. I agree with the poem and wish I had possessed the courage to follow heart instead of head. I have no doubt I would now be richer is so many ways.

Cooper

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Very kind and much appreciated my friend

:)
Not just a simpler way of life portrayed here Neville, but in so many ways, a much better one.

Those 'poor, rich men tourists and those forced to sit all day behind computers,' really hits home, and I often wonder what on earth we are doing to ourselves.

Beccy.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago

I am delighted but not surprised you see it thus Beccy.. thanks a bundle for checking in ..
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Yes. The last line bites.
Reminds me of my family back home but instead of stockings it's watermelons or dried peppers, or pickled peppers. And whenever I visit they feel sorry for me for how my life is. And I can't blame them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


sounds like you gotta plan .. I shall keep my fingers crossed for you .. and the grandkids ... read more
Papaya

4 Years Ago

Lol. :)
I won't have grandkids for a long time.
But when I do....!
Ok. On a .. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


I agree .. well with that last sentence anyway ... cheers :)
A very visual scene of perhaps an African village. A hive of almost cottage industry taking place here. The whole family playing their part so they can afford to live their simple lives. I imagine them all smiling as they earned their daily bread. The final stanza had me smiling too. Yes, they would probably be very content with what they'd got and no doubt would imagine a 9-5 day behind a computer screen hell. Would I wear them? Why not? Keep you warm in winter.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago




You are indeed very astute Chris .. thank you
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

I'll be accepting that as a compliment then :)
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I am not a wife but I'd like a pair:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


I can only imagine the attraction ... I do like blue and yellow though .. bless you Kira :)
X

4 Years Ago

......and you Neville :)
I should like a pair of those
Blue and yellow
Dyed :)

I loved this

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


.............. Many thanks Emily B .. the thought made me smile and truly :)

Idyllic, near Hardyesque! Real thoughts, real scenes how was and should be.. charming. Same way through til that farewell cynicism proves to be as true as can be. Now's the time to plan for living 'stead of watching others do it, do you think?!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neville

4 Years Ago


.........thank you, absolutely .. he could not agree moor
Interesting...maybe the legs have bells on them....🌹

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Neville

4 Years Ago


................. Mine sometimes do :) Cheers Kelly :)

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