Riding a Curve

Riding a Curve

 

Knowing her

like I did

indeed once

know her ..

Yet all but

far too briefly ..

Was like

riding a curve ..

Set in stone

upon a simple

eyelash flutter

A single

sun ray spied ..

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Riding a Curve'
Neville,
Memory is a wonderful thing. Time stands still no matter the time gone.
Line:
"Riding a curve set in stone upon a single eyelash flutter a single sun ray spied."
If this was written about a real person she must of been special. It expressed the beauty of the human connection in a sweet way.
Kathy

[Neville]

thank you Kathy .. she was indeed ......... N:)

[LJW]

Nice work here.
Simple, concise.
The arc of a curve against stark angularity....is love itself.

[Neville]

that'll do nicely .. thank you LJW .. N :)

[Lorry]

Ach Nev.. You might give the impression that your Blokey McBloke-Bloke, who is never to be confused with Jocky McLaddy, but we ain't fooled mate, you'd get a piece (sarnie) at anyone's door, ya old smoothy you!
Hope you are well, or at least wellerer than the hopefully long forgotten ago. I absconded the caff myself for a bit, the blight got a holda me and a lot of others here too. Betterer now, after a long recoopera... Recouparat.... Rest 😊

[Neville]

......... thanks mate & for letting me know you are on the mend (or were at least a month ago) hope you are still tickity boo your mate Me :)

[Ken Simm.]

Beautiful and almost Zen like. I love it. Sad and lifelike in its beauty.

[Neville]

well zen I thank you kindly Ken ................ N

[lightsong]

Some women play hard to get, and maybe she even didn't notice You yet though You know her as You know yourself... I get these thoughts reading your love poem, might be right, might be wrong.

[Neville]

I am truly so very sorry for the delay in responding to your ever so kind review note my dear friend .. I can not understand why I only just discovered this error on my part ... I hope you can forgive this and accept the boatload of Sorry's I am subsequently sending by first class mail ... Neville

[lightsong]

Nothing to be sorry or apologize to dear Neville, these things happen everyday specially in this "strange enough" site, but it doesn't mean I won't accept a boat of flowers ;> hope You are well and happy in your world there~

[Neville]

I am okay & thank you .. I am just not here so very often now .. pray tell what is going on .. N

[lightsong]

is there anything going on here? if so I don't know what it is and we both learned to not care about it lol. message me if You need anything~

[Neville]

oh' okay .. I maybe read too deeply into your 'strange enough' site remark above .. tis easy one .. yes, of course I will and the very same to you my friend .. Neville

[Neville]

I meant easy done :)

[lightsong]

oh! so the problem is me LOL, but yes it's a strange sites in many ares as we both know :>

[Neville]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 🙂))

[Fay Slimm]

Love knows its own and just one look can be set in stone as your special verse expresses - - this has more than a touch of pathos mon ami - - - am glad I looked in today............x

[Neville]

Bless you dear Fay ... and thank you tooly ... x

[Einstein Noodle]

never accelerate going into a curve ... one risks overshooting and loosing control .. acceleration straightens the path through the apex as one keeps an eye on the outcome ... brief interludes are most certainly set in stone .. we remember them wondering all the woulda coulda shoulda about them .. those perfect eye lashes .. mystical spells ... blessed to have them eh!? beautiful poem ... sparks me alive this morning .. old stone or not. ;)
E.

[Neville]

sounds like sound advice from the maestro himself .. thank you my dear friend .. Seasons best and All Good Things ......................... Neville

[light and ashes]

This is kind of beautiful....

[Neville]

kinder of you to say so tho' ......... thank you L&A :)

[light and ashes]

:) you are welcome.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville... love at first sight... of an eyelash flutter...
as soft as a butterfly among the flowers... love is a feeling
that settles upon your heart. Be brave and never give up.
truly, Pat

[Neville]

Bless you dear Pat .. you always cheer me up & deeply ................................................ N x

[barleygirl]

Perfectly expressed to get the curve across *smile* Nice to read you again (((HUGS)))

[Neville]

thanks Margie .. take care now won't ya (NUGS) N x