Remember Me She Said

Remember Me She Said

 

Remember me

she said ..

Come sit awhile

and sip ..

Today has not

been bad

at all, and

tomorrow then

shall maybe bring

a whole

new raft

of sweet market

possibilities ..

Oh’ yes indeed,

on rare

occasions such

as these ..

They all said she

seemed

more like some

special

kind of May queen

perhaps

than a single

solitary sunflower

basking in a

field of exquisite

tumbleweed ..

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

You make my heart leap with such abandon. I read it over and over again. To be remembered. That is all we could ever hope for!

[Neville]

You just made my day Kelly & I am only just having my breakfast. Many thank You's n truly .. Neville :)

[Lisasview]

Hi Neville,
The ying and yang of your poem really resonates with me.
Tomorrow a new raft of possibilities… such a great line!
Lisa, at the gym

[Neville]

thank you Lisa atg .. and kindly too ... Neville thinking about wot he might have for tea :)

[Lisasview]

Isn't this wonderful... I have started a whole funny stream with some others on this site.. First started out just writing.. Lisa, now in Spain and then I expanded it..Some caught on and respond in like.
I think this helps make more of a connection..
Lisa, Just had a nice cup of tea and honey.
Lisa

[Neville]

sounds good to me ..........

[Lisasview]

Such fun..Also, I posted.. Wanting ..a new poem..
Lisa, nw going to watch Ozark... amazing series!!

[Lisasview]

now going... typing way too fast..

[Neville]

I have seen the whole series & yes, thoroughly enjoyed .. Neville now typing up his notes from earlier before having a shower ............ :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for Spring and life Neville. I loved the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

Thanks a million Coyote ... Neville :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome, Neville.

[Tom]

Love here fleeting but like Spring bloom, leaves a long lasting, deep rooted impression on the psyche ..

' tomorrow then



shall maybe bring



a whole



new raft



of sweet market



possibilities ..'

[Neville]

I love seeing the blue of ya tunic Tom and that pith hat of yours always makes the corners of my mouth turn upwards .. your visits are likewise always appreciated Tom and ever so bloomin truly tooly ... Neville :)

[Aura]

The first line:
"Remember me
she said .." and the last line
"single
solitary sunflower
basking in a
field of exquisite
tumbleweed .." is really interesting when you put those two lines side by side. How could you forget something so uniquely different? A sunflower in a field of tumbleweeds, bright and beautiful, and tumbleweeds.... not as attractive as a sunflower.

[Neville]

thank you so very bloomin much Aura, you really are most kind .. Neville

[Aura]

The pleasure is all mine!

[lightsong]

Many of your poem tuck deep within its tides a pain unspoken. it is there... but the expressions prefer to keep it deep, private and special. this is exquisite dear Neville. when something moves me inside in an endearing tender way that my tear almost fell. it means it has a great amount of sincere feelings. how lonely she was... to only want to be remembered. nothing more.

[Neville]

I can not tell you just how much I appreciate the kind words you left for me here Ghounwah .. but very muchly falls well short of what and how they make me feel .................. Neville :)

[lightsong]

always my pleasure Neville ..... :>

[Neville]

................................. 💖

[Temperance]

"basking in a field of exquisite tumbleweed.." brings such imagery! I love this line! Feels like a bittersweet homage to a loved one. Thank you for your talented work!

[Neville]

thank you so very much my very kind literary friend :)