Seriously Wronged

don't ya just see it happening all the time ..

Seriously Wronged

She gave him

all of her passwords

and also,

the freedom to roam ..

Then rubbed

each of his palms

with silver

and seriously thought,

that the b*****d

would still more

than likely, come home ..

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

She must have led a very sheltered life to be so naive silly girl .... trust has to be earned, maybe someone should tell her that .

[Neville]

sadly, some people have to learn the hard way .. over and over or so it seems .. Neville read more
sadly, some people have to learn the hard way .. over and over or so it seems .. Neville

[Stella Armour]

some never learn Neville , for some odd reason they like to be doormats because they enjoy people feeling sorry for them ... i have known a few women like that ...

[Neville]

............... go on .. your kiddin me write ..

[Stella Armour]

Nope I am not , they go from one relationship to another having children and saying they left because they were being knocked about and do after several children to several men who supposedly all knocked them about you realize they like to play the martyr so the next bloke takes up with them and the pattern repeats itself each time the woman pretending to be naive

[Neville]

get outa here you're having me on ..

[Stella Armour]

I am not lol, living on a rough council estate opens your eyes …. Wide… anyways I have gone a lot of driving in all the heavy rain today and I am a bit cream crackered tbh . Chill out time for me now …..

[Neville]

Enjoy yourself .. N :)

[Dianne S Penfold]

Love makes us blind sometimes. It's sad that the main character in this poem was so naive but I bet they learnt a lesson that they will never forget. This poem is short but to the point. Well written.

[Neville]

again, I thank you for visiting my little scribble Dianne .. much appreciated my friend .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Oh my goodness. She trusted him with her money. The bank account is empty and he’s done a runner. A bit green behind the ears I reckon, but as to him, he is a first rate bar steward, no question. Good evening my friend.

Chris

[Neville]

greener where there's none as me ma would say .. neva did know what she meant .. but quoting her whenever I can makes me chuckle inside .. Good morning our Chris ... Neville

[John the Baptist]

I think this one gives new meaning to the word "naive." "Stupid" might be in the running, too.

[Neville]

you have such way with words sir .. now go meditate on cheers .. Neville