Her Fear

Evryone does mistakes in life, even I did one. But I never got a chance to rectify it...

Once, when I gazed into the mirror,
I saw her eyes, eyes full of fear.
She was only fifteen,
But her life, hopelessly ruined.

A fear of the world she lived in
A fear of the people she was around
Doesn't she even stand a single chance?
To suffer was she really bound?

She knew she did a mistake,
But also she did repent;
But the selfish world around her didn't
Let her forget what had happened.

Will she ever be able to move on?
Live a life happier and beyond?
Will she ever get that one chance
For which she forever longed?

Author's Note

This is my story, my life.

Reviews

[David Marsden]

This seems like another poem from the heart.
It holds so much sadness. When we look into a mirror we usually see what our hearts tell us. It's almost like a spell, like an enchantment. If we are down we see sadness because that is what we feel and it is reflected back at us. If we are happy we see a person full of joy. Happiness isn't a place on a map it's a feeling inside of us.
I think optimism is what drives us forward. Our thoughts reflect our mood. If we think happy it will be returned back to us in abundance.
You write what you feel, which is what produces great poetry. We can all write a sad story, even while in a happy mood, because we have all experienced it at some time.
You have a way of expressing meaning. I hope you carry on writing and I would love you to write a happy poem because I know it will be be just as dramatic.

[Neytri]

Thank you so much Sir. Your words would always move me forward.

[Woody]

whatever the mistake, life goes on. don't they say what doesn't kill you makes you stronger?
nicely penned.
cheer up, Neytri :)

[Neytri]

Thank you Sir

[Paul Hunter]

It's a really beautiful poem, and it reads well. I love it. It's such a pessimistic outlook. At 15 people think this is the way things are. It gets better. I promise.

[Neytri]

You know, things never seem to get better with me. Well, thanks for reviewing.

[Neytri]

You know, things never seem to get better with me. Well thanks for reviewing.

[Paul Hunter]

I hope they do.

[Akki]

Nice idea...your poem is so beautiful and smooth to read. good work....
keep it up....

[Neytri]

Thank you. And as I mentioned earlier, its not merely an idea, its my life.

[Akki]

Sorry my friend for that.....
my pleasure...