Beach of Dreams

Another Saggittarian Philosophy

If we are made of stardust, 

then peace should be a sunny beach

 that everyone can share.

Author's Note

I think we can find this place if we try.

Reviews

[s y e]

I really think we could fine this place, maybe if we all work together we could find one for everyone, too. Although I think I'm asking too much, haha. Nicely written, Astro.

~ Noodle.

[Astro]

That place already exists Noodle, people just have to learn to acknowledge it. Thank you very much for the review. :D

[Kristin Lee]

I really like this one. It cuts through the daily chaos to a place of simplicity that is absolutely beautiful. Well done.

[Astro]

Thanks Kristin, sometimes the simplest of things work best.

[Troy Henson]

I think if WE all worked together on this then EVRYONE would share this special place.
Loved it.
Regards
Troy

[Astro]

We all are the beach, we just need to learn to acknowledge it and enjoy it.

[Troy Henson]

So true my friend:)

[Vile]

Good s**t man. I can dig it. Im generally not a fan of haiku's, but I dont mind this one. It's got a real nice feel to it. Ive read some of your work, it's very chill and smooth and relaxing for the mostpart, peaceful.

[Astro]

Thanks Vile, it does sound a bit like a Haiku of sorts but it was really just a bit of poetic philosophy that I believe in. I have several short philosophical pieces like this, I call them Saggittarian philosophies. I hope to one day put together a collection of them. Thank you for the kind words about my poetry as well. Peace.

[Vile]

Of course, man.

[Seth Durham]

What if we're not made of stardust? I'm like 80-something percent H2O... can I still play on your beach? :)

[Astro]

It wouldn't be a beach without water, although, I'm sure that you are aware of the separate particles that compose your wetness, how they too are but stardust that form the beach of us all. Thanks for the review.

[Dana Alsamsam]

i love that you've bolded "we" and "everyone" this is such a peaceful piece that really emphasizes unity, and with such beautiful words. it gave me this beautiful image of looking up at the night sky on a beach late at night and having one of those beautiful realization moments of "i am just a tiny piece of this world. this life is larger than just me" great work in such few words :)

[Astro]

That was definitely the aim of the piece, I'm glad you could connect and enjoy. Thanks for the great review.

[Aseel]

nice short written philosophy that made me conclued that we all nearly have the same concept about humanity and that we all agree that humans created from the same thing and that is why humans should find peace instead of fighting because after all we can be considered brothers and sisters . This piece of metaphor is really nice and for me the stardust can be pointing out to Adam and Eve that all humans made from my own believe

[Astro]

I'm glad you like it, we are all made up of stardust that is older than us, that is us and will remain even after we pass on.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I'm a Sag, so perhaps that's why I love the beach so much. I guess I do adhere to the philosophy that we are all created from the same particles and that paradise can be anything we choose for it to be...at least on the good days I feel this way. Beautiful bit of metaphor...and stunning imagery.

[Astro]

Thank you very much. That's cool as December.