Locked without LOVE

Very inspiring poem about how I changed and let no obstacle make me a statistic to prison. Mistakes make you stronger. Feedback appreciated, thank you.......

Locked up without LOVE
By:Nicholas Dykstra

Love is powerful and priceless,
Without it can drive you senseless.

Many years with no written letters,
Can hurt your mind, body, soul; neglect from others.

What doesn't kill You makes you stronger,
I believed and and made it without a hand “out-er”.

Four years of my young life taken by the system,
A kid without guidance is indeed a victim.

Learn that lost love will tear you down,
But don't give up because it's just a round.

Obstacles ahead will appear in your life,
Take a deep breath, and think twice.

Mistakes are made due to being human,
It's changing your life for GOD and bettering yourself Anjuman.




Nicholas Dykstra@2016

Author's Note

I know there will be confusion but go to the end and there is a link for ones who don't believe me, awesome finding in a word- anjuman, meaning - means “In the meeting of desires.” I meant as we make mistakes, do hard time at a young age, learn that no love remained and grew without it. It's a Persian meaning - ANJUMAN (Persian)means “In the meeting of desires.”

Found and researched at https://lyricstaal.com/glossary/anjuman-meaning-in-english-hindi/

Thank you , the Persian word is a great inspiration to MY LIFE of recovery.

Reviews

[Gee]

We all learn from our mistakes and hopefully improve for the better. Life itself is a great teacher, only trouble is by the time you start to fully understand its true beauty the old reaper is prowling around in the shadows. Enjoyed the read