MMIH (HIDDEN SCENE) +FLAMING ARROW+

Just something that I cut while making the 2nd Chapter of Magic Made in Heaven...

*When Hiroto recovered from Keiko's intense lightning attack, he planned a prank on Kiyoshi...*

Hiroto: *stands up* *smiles darkly*

Kiyoshi: *standing next to Yumi, who was lying down*

Hiroto: Hey Kiyoshi, remember the baseball game that our school had when we had

our sports fest?

Kiyoshi: Yes...

Hiroto: Remember that pitch Daichi-senpai did?

Kiyoshi: *turns around to look at him blankly*

Hiroto: Like...THIS! *throws a fireball at him*

Kiyoshi: *catches the fireball with his right hand* *quickly forms his hands into that of an archer holding his bow* *shoots it back to Hiroto*

Hiroto: *got hit in the face* *rapidly wipes his face with his hand*

Ryuuji: *chuckles* He got you good... You should've seen your face when you got hit.

Yumi: *stand up beside Kiyoshi* HAHAHA! YOU DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING NOW DID YA!!!

Kiyoshi: *crosses his arms* You've got some nerve attacking me like that.

Hiroto: *face becomes disappointed* *then quickly threw another fireball*

Kiyoshi: *moves a little to the left (away from Yumi)*

Yumi: *gets hit with Hiroto's fireball* *dark aura surrounds her body* You've got some guts.................

Hiroto: Hey! I was aiming for Kiyoshi!!!

Yumi: *goes up to Hiroto* Kiyoshi 2 feet away from me... *grabs Hiroto's collar* *shakes him hard and fast* YOU THINK THAT THAT THING WAS FUNNY?!

Hiroto: *hair was all messed up* *dizzy* All right... I'm sorry!!!

Keiko: Great, we just got into the dorms and they already fought...

Ryuuji: *nods in agreement* I think I'll hang around with you guys more often...

Author's Note

Tell me what you think... (If it's a little short or there are parts that you don't like or anything)
I'll also accept some suggestions for the next chapter and the other chapters to come... :3
Thanks...

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Um... Can I suggest something?
Umm... since this year for literary students is focusing in plays... I got to know the difference between screenplays and stageplays... I know this is a screenplay but I guess it lacks something to be one...
You've to enclose the movements for wryly~()
And you've to add the setting and be elaborate about it and separate the scenes with numbers...
I'm just suggesting it.... Sorry

[Nigaiyuki]

Oh okay... I see now... I'll try to do that when I do my next screenplay.
And don't worry, I got it wrong, It's my first time writing a screenplay. I'll try to improve the next time I do it... Thank you for your review!!! :3

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, i'm glad to be able to help