Parallel In All Ways

Another 'blast from the past'...so to speak..wrote years ago~

Parallel in all ways
Together and for always...
The air I breathe;
The space between,
Of all the wonders these eyes have seen...

A soul misplaced,
Guided, yet unled ...
Nothing fragile,
Yet everything is breakable...

To embrace you is to die;
To feel the pain you feel inside.
I close my eyes,
And breathe you in...
Your touch is the sweetest sin.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

SEEMS WRITTEN LIKE A SONG...THE WAY YOU DESIGNED THIS VERSE AND THE FREE FLOW OF YOUR WORDS...AS I READ THIS FROM START TO FINISH...YOU TELL THE STORY IN A SHORT AMOUNT OF TIME...

[Nightingale Silva]

Thanks! I try to make my poems lyrical and free-flowing ^=^

[Glen Yumang Manese]

YOU'RE WELCOME...YOU CAN SEE THAT IN THIS ONE...GOOD TO READ YOU...

[Quoting Ravens]

Very lovely. This flows beautifully.

[Nightingale Silva]

Thank you so very much ^_^