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Blood spill

Blood spill

A Chapter by SlipKnoT
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what anger looks like to me.

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As the bubbles in my blood start to pump through my body, I feel the beating of my heart increase. Not a soul nor a noise is heard or made. I am in solitde, I am in silence.

 

I am trying to gather the scattered puzzle pieces off the floor. I want to piece my life back together, I want to finish the puzzle and then burn it, I want to watch the layers of cardboard burn and cringe into nothing but sheets of dust.

 

I shall sweep the remains of ash into a dust pan and pour them onto whats left of the grave of my old self. I'll dig a deep hole, plunging myself into it I feel myself falling faster and lighter, like my sol is a butterfly.

 

I hear the howl of the demon that lurks within. My heart stops flat, my body has some how returned to its original position above the earth's surface. I have the shovel in my hand, I feel a surge of anger slur through my core. I want to let it burst out and yell everything I've wanted to say. Should I ??



© 2012 SlipKnoT


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Nice, and discriptive

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is well done...Very nice descriptions

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, sweet, and very personal. This hits home with me. I know how you feel. Very well written Nikki. Very well written. I am definitely adding this one to my library. :D Keep it up and keep me posted!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write the power comes threw this write keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ouch! A very strong write. love it:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Puzzle analogy is great. Well written powerful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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