A pilgrim's words

A pilgrim's words

A Poem by Nima.Hope

Dedicated to the most special one

I know a girl from wonderland
Who knows that I live in the neverland
and she is the one who has deeply transformed me
Since I know her my heart has grown
much bigger than when I was about to reborn
and she is the one who has truly conquered me
Her words are like a Goddess's myth
Many angels are supporting her breathe
I wish I could hug her to reach the heavens

Her name means Song
Her  kindness is a grace
I found her when there were
many troubles to face
and now I face them without any scare

I knew no woman before I got to know her
I was sure I'll never find a true bearer of love
But she proved me wrong with the lovely
personage that the lord gave her

My words look like a free verse
My mind is disable to make   sense
But I truly feel that my heart has
outdrew it

I'm the pilgrim of her vast temple
She showed me loving her is sweet
and very simple

I'm a Persian guy who looks like Alexander
Searching for the water of life
To become the successor of Khader
Maybe I'm a paradox
A Protestant Orthodox
or the strange joy of sadness
Or the weird grief of Happiness
But whatever I am
I know it well that
she is a drop of that wanted rare water

© 2023 Nima.Hope

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Author's Note

I'll be glad to have your ideas and comments on this poem. The picture shows the goddess of poetry "Calliope".
Note: My dear friends, I can hardly connect to the cafe through the VPN and some of you might say that Nima does not review our poems and is selfish but that is not true, I will if I can. Regards

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When I said that I cried, I really did cry... tears can be the most meaningful expression when words fail to tell. All I can say now that this is for me, heavenly, pure and precious like the snow🤍

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I wanted to cry many times but it wasn't easy to let them out, instead you cried🥺, how lovely and.. read more

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Added on February 7, 2023
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