A LETTER

A LETTER

A Story by Shah Sabia
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Just a letter to the one who doesnt seem to care.

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Let me tell you something, something i wanted to tell you from the very start, from the preface, this is something i wanted to tell you since you said you love me. 27 june, 10:44 pm it was. Maybe you joked around, or maybe you just said it for fun. But i, i was serious. I was damn serious and humourless too. I remember my reply. "Loveyoutoo". And you know what ? I truly mean it till date.
Iloveyou for all that you are, for all that you have been, and for all that you're yet to be.
I wont say sorry for anything. Its like imissyou, i do, i really do. I'm not actually good at expressing but with you i feel like the sky is singing and the flowers dancing. I feel the heavens smiling that smile to me which i know is only for me, i feel like the the ambience is talking to me and telling me that you're the one for me. I feel the whole aura in a state of total blithe.
Its okay if you're at fault, its more than okay if you feel like you're not. What i want you to know is that i'll be there, till the hell freezes, and till the cats start barking. I'll be there until the cows come home, i'll be there for you endlessly. I'll stay for always, and that's my promise. Even if someday we are afar, i'll be there gazing that gaze at you wherein my eyes would tell you that i'm all yours. ❤
I just expect certain things from you, i expect you to talk to me and listen to whatever i say. A "good" good morning and a "good" goodnight is all i need. A day has 1440 mins, i just wish for your 10 mins, you can keep the rest of 1430 with you. Somedays when you're overbusy, i'll be good with just 5. Dont i even deserve those 5 mins ?
If you think i dont, i'll still be there (dumb me) ;) :D ❤

Truly, wholly, solely and undividedly yours,
Sabia :)

© 2015 Shah Sabia


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Like the others say, you need to structure this, your writing is worth your time because this is very beautiful. And Danny's right, you deserve more, remember that you should love yourself first and then the others.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

First of all thank you so much for this kind review of yours, it definitely means a lot.
And .. read more
Its a good piece. But would have been better if you had structured it properly. I am guessing, may be you wanted to give the piece a raw & real feel. And believe me there are sentences that are plain awesome! Its just unsettling to see that there's not even space between two completely different words.
Otherwise the piece it is very gripping and eloquent!
Keep up the good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

Thankyou so much, i'll keep it all in mind :)
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

All my pleasure ^_^
I'd say, whoever it might be, you really deserve much more than ten minutes...say around eleven? (lol) to get serious, awesome write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

Haha right, 11 is more than okay :p Well, thankyou :)
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

you are welcome. :-)
Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

Yeah coming then :p :D
greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

Yea, whenever, wherever and forever ;)
FaeryQueen

8 Years Ago

you say it best!
Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

Means a lot. ♥
your unconditional love for him..... ♥

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

Khaak e siyah :p
I hope its only a fiction (:(:(:

Posted 8 Years Ago


sarik

8 Years Ago

next chapter please...
Shah Sabia

8 Years Ago

You need to wait a bit :)
sarik

8 Years Ago

sure !! and I hope it will be joyful

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