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Oh when I look at you,
I find enormous joy,
Having you by my side,
As life passes by,

How lucky am I!!
Who found a willful listener,
The one who lifts my burden,
And frees me from my prison,

Like the pleasant autumn,
Nature's refreshing start,
Is your company,
My brightest shining star,

As the force of the mighty ocean,
Both gentle and strong,
You help me get through,
In all rights and wrong,

And as we get older,
May I make you feel the same,
Embarking our journey together,
Ready to set sail.

Reviews

[Yashika]

Isn't a person who listens to us all everyone wants? Judging from the poem, I'd have to say if you have one in your life, you're one of the luckiest people. And the poem, I must say, is fun to try to relate to one's life. A person needs someone who would listen to them and take all their burden away.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thanks yashika, still finding one, this was just an idea of how life would be when the one arrives, people, the right ones make life easier is such simples ways

[jennifer little]

wow beautiful flow great write keep up the good work thanks for sharing once again

[LadyNaida]

To have that special someone in your life that listens to you with their heart and doesn't judge you laughs at your jokes, but most importantly, this person is always by your side through thick and thin, for better or for worst.

[Chris Shaw]

Life's journey with a special someone by our side. What an enormous difference that can make to our well being. Someone who loves us, someone who listens, someone who puts us first in the pecking order. This was a delightful read, so uplifting Nitesh. Your title intriguing. All best wishes.

Chris

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank you so much Christine

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. What does your title mean please?

[Nitesh Mahabal]

It means time spent with loved ones

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous:)

[wordman]

only through love this journey can begin

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank you wordman, appreciate your review, you have always been so positive for all my work 😊

[wordman]

you`re welcome