Who Are You Hiding?

Who are you hiding within youself?

Deep inside there is someone else.

Who am I deep in my core?

Some unknown creature or folklore?

We all seem to be,

Someone, Something we cannot see.

Deep in the caverns of our lost souls

We have lost ourselves and changed our goals.

Where is the real me hiding?

I'm not me on the inside.

Creatures within me dictate my emotion,

If I am the divisor, where is the quotient?

Who have we become monster within me?

Please, why can't you let me be me?

Leave me be, Leave me be.

Reviews

[disheveledApathy]

We all have monsters, but only some of us choose to fight them.
Other than a few grammar errors, great poem. ;D
-Mer

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Hmm.. talking to the monsters within, without, or the world in general? Very nice.