Jenn with Flow

slowly
gently-
licking
down.

Tracing the light
reflected on your curves,
moving with your sides,
guided by your hands
below-

tasting your wetness.

as nails glide
around you-
loving
only
you.

Reviews

[PhoeniX]

a poem with a hint of seduction... good job

[Erotic Goddess]

Tracing the light
reflected on your curves,

Short, sweet, and sexy as hell... Loved it. I think it is wonderful to find so many new erotic writers on here with such stunning talent. :)

Love,
Stephanie

[Haden]

nice write noah. it's short, erotic, and sentimental all at the same time. great feat for such a small space.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Very good... the poem was pretty hott... I like how you added the loveing only you part... it made it sweet...

[Pinky]

Very erotic... Great write!

[Leticia Bailey]

A very sensual and tender poem. At first glance, I didn't realize the position. Now that I know, it's even better ; )

[Sally Edwards]

wow even less words and yet I feel the page sizzling, very sensual and yes arousing again,

[Anne Martin]

This was good, however I thought "tasting your wetness" was unnecessary and not in tune with the rest. Everything else was more subtle.

[Carrie L. Hale]

I'm gonna echo the "that was hot" sentiment. Gettin' a little goosebumpy here :). Both beautiful and sexy, what more could a person want?

[Stacy]

I enjoyed the words.