Jenn with Flow

slowly
gently-
licking
down.

Tracing the light
reflected on your curves,
moving with your sides,
guided by your hands
below-

tasting your wetness.

as nails glide
around you-
loving
only
you.

Reviews

[Azalee Schmetterling]

You do a lot in so little words. Awesome work, I'm going to be blunt and say that was HOT! You seem to have a talent for erotica. The form flows... no pun intended... beautifully and the images are powerful. Can't wait to read more of your work.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A very succinct and sensual write. Most enjoyable - so few words have captured so much. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Sara Muschweck]

great write, you have been able to capture the heat with such eloquence.

[Amanda]

it's oh so good...i could feel the erotic slide down.....
a good write.

Always,

Amanda

[['tatiz speis]]

The breaking up of the sentences to different lines brings out the sensuality even more... It makes me want to read slower. Really good job!

[Kelsie :]]

Hmm well i felt shivers run down my back when i read this poem, i guess thats a good sign :)
nice job,
cant wait to read more!

[Tania Leigh]

Very steamy but subtle.....a pleasure to read.

Welcome to the cafe :-)

[Tai Chi Italy]

To the point of perfect delivery. A great erotic short to be retraced in the mind. Nice to meet your work friend, Tai

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

elegant and beautiful - fantastic job

[Star-Runner]

A very lovely poem here, I like this very well written.