Have you seen

Have you seen

A Poem by Nomo

Have you seen the world
Have you seen the sun
Have you seen the moon
Have you seen the galaxy

Have you seen the stars
Have you seen mars
Have you seen the solor system
Have you seen the sky 

The world is beautiful 
You can't change what we see
Parts of the world isn't pretty 
Yet we choose to overlook that

Understand this for me
How does the world show its beauty
How does the world work
How does the world pick where life will grow

© 2021 Nomo


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Damn right the world is PRETTY messed up.Too bad we can't change it.Sometimes we need to change in order to survive here.They say animals have it bad in the jungle,being killed and killing themselves but humans aren't much better either.

Posted 3 Years Ago


So very simple in its set up and wise all rolled together. Very charming, I really like what you have done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


To me this is a really profound piece. The repetition of the first two verses almost read as a love letter to the world around us, but then you bring us back to reality with the question why we overlook the bad.

The world works how you want it to work, you make your own reality, but need to know and recognize the ugly and the evil to make it work and find your stride. Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

23 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 31, 2021
Last Updated on January 31, 2021

Author

Nomo
Nomo

Menomonie, WI



About
If these stories could speak What would their characters say? What would they do Would they wonder why They are just ink on paper? Or would they seek something else? Would they try to escape the.. more..

Writing
Jumble Jumble

A Poem by Nomo


Less time Less time

A Poem by Nomo


"Normal" "Normal"

A Poem by Nomo



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..