Always smile..

Always smile..

A Poem by Noor.92

On the face, there is a smile

In the heart, there is a dismal

Don't worry, that's not a facade

It's my way of appearing brittle

© 2014 Noor.92


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For only four lines this was written to capture the readers emotions so well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

3 Years Ago

thanks, Your words mean a lot to me.. :)
It has a musical sound when you read it out loud, I really liked how you got so much thought across in only a couple lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your encouraging remarks Colleen.. :)
very nice !!! and powerful

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Glad you liked it.. :)
CoffeePoet

4 Years Ago

;) your welcome
few words ....but an ocean of emotions .

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

thanks a lot..
It's really difficult to capture this much feeling into a short poem, but you did it. Good job (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

thanks Dakota. Means a lot to me.. :)
Whatever the body shows, the brain will eventually think. Keep smiling. Keeping hoping and watch the world transform about you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Deep True words...
I really think this is amazing It captures a lot in just 4 lines. Also just the type of thing I have been struggling with.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much. Encouraging remarks always help a person in grooming...
So often we plaster a smile on our faces when our heart is breaking. It is a bit of a facade though....we portray what we want the world to know and hide what we feel is ours alone. Very emotive write. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

True words...
Thanks so much, Lydia... :)

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Added on November 2, 2014
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Tags: smile, facade

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