Nightmare (In Dreams and Reality)

Nightmare (In Dreams and Reality)

A Poem by Chaos Complex
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Plagued by thoughts.

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Staring at the ceiling hoping it would fall,
Eyes wander to these surrounding blank walls.
Four corners and blocked from the stars,
Caged shut and trapped, even without any bars.
Thoughts roam my head, in the form of plagued creatures;
Just like my self-esteem, their flesh is peeling from damaged features.
They murmur and wheeze, like smoking cigarettes and weed;
Clawing at my mind's surface, paranoid and in need- of escape.
Swing open the drapes:
And let the moonlight give me the illusion that it's safe.
Caution: This is my brain.
Blood stains and chains, slashed veins and exposed brain membranes.
Corpses of animals looking like they were on a road's lane,
Still crawling on the floor, as they survived exploding tanks of propane.
Shots fired from my mouth,
Screaming "GET OUT."
Let this nightmare cease!
Someone kill my doubts-
Of waking up safe the next morning.
Without feeling scorning... toward my own mentality.
A nightly battle within me: self affliction, night terror brutality.
The thoughts that haunt me in dreams and reality.

© 2010 Chaos Complex


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Brain toxicology, man.. Loved how thoughts can haunt & taunt us in our
waking & sleep mode moments /// Ghoulish, nightmarish~~ indeed..
The imagery is grotesquely fantastic ... You definitely have slapped
your dark and brutal terror onto the page.
Loved how you've described how the brain needs some airing out
in the 1st 4 lines ... you're such a brain tease..
thanx for sharing!
LLR

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Brain toxicology, man.. Loved how thoughts can haunt & taunt us in our
waking & sleep mode moments /// Ghoulish, nightmarish~~ indeed..
The imagery is grotesquely fantastic ... You definitely have slapped
your dark and brutal terror onto the page.
Loved how you've described how the brain needs some airing out
in the 1st 4 lines ... you're such a brain tease..
thanx for sharing!
LLR

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dude this poem is brutal!!
this should be a death core break down man!!
i loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice flow and rhythm in this poem! your writings keep amusing me! keep writing... :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written great read realy dont know what to say bout it i liked it and like all youre work i thoughtit was fantastic keep it up :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought this was so well written. An enthralling read. You're so honest, i love it. You're a great writer, who should never stop.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 17, 2010
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